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Old 03-26-2007, 06:46 AM
Bravo Chang
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Dear all:

Can any English native speaker help to find out language mistakes for
the following paragraphs. I was almost tired out and find no way to
improve it. The editor still say" is essential that you have your
mnauscript checked by a native English speaker."

Thank you first!

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In many imaging circumstances, phase information about objects plays a
role as well as or even more important than intensity does, for
example, when the objects are pure-phased, highly transparent and
absorb little light, imaging can not be simply realized by the
transmitted or reflected intensity information of thermal lights.
Although phase distribution about an object can be retrieved from its
Fourier-transform diffraction pattern was firstly proposed by Sayre
and dedicated efforts described in the works like Ref.[1] demonstrated
and developed the techniques, the efforts seems to be in vain if
diffraction imaging applications were in hard x-ray, gamma-ray, or
other wavelengths where no effective lens or/and no coherent source is
available. In works of Ref.[5] and Ref.[6], the authors reported a new
version of the landmark Hanbury Brown and Twiss (HBT) experiment,
which have been utilized for stellar interferometric imaging, these
works gave lens-less subwavelength Fourier-transform pattern of a
Youngs double slit with thermal sources, but the phase information of
objects are not yet mentioned because the object they used was
amplitude-only. In fact, as we will discuss latterly, the classical
HBT-type stellar interferometric imaging, featured that the joint
detection plane in the optical path passes through the object, will be
invalid for retrieving phase knowledge about the object. Similar
conclusion and Fourier transform imaging for pure phase object have
also been reported earlier with use of lens in optical paths. Since
middle years of last decades, ghost imaging (GI) related issues has
been enthusiastically studied, here, the reason for the term being
used is that the image of an object, diffractive or geometrical, would
appear as a function of the position in the path that actually never
pass the object, and this unique feature is regarded as a key
difference from classical stellar interferometric imaging. Although
whether the entangled beams was a prerequisite once have been hotly
debated, it is generally accepted now that classical thermally emitted
light can be used for GI and quantum entangled beams is not a
prerequisite. In this letter, we report, for first time, the lensless
retrieval of sub-wave length Fourier transform imaging, within fresnel
diffraction range by using GI scheme. Also, we experimentally
demonstrate that ghost-imaging scheme (GI) retrieves complex amplitude
transmittance of objects rather than the transmitted intensities as
the stellar interferometric imaging scheme does.

We first summarize the theory skeleton for two-photon joint-detection
and its related physics behind the lensless Fourier transform imaging
in Section 3, then, in Section 3, the experimental setup were briefly
introduced, after that, the experimental results were shown in Section
4 by comparing with both theoretical anticipation and Fourier
transform imaging performed by 2f system. The conclusions and
discussions were finally presented in Section 5.
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Old 03-26-2007, 01:18 PM
N:dlzc D:aol T:com \(dlzc\)
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Dear Bravo Chang:

"Bravo Chang" <[Only registered users see links. ]> wrote in message
news:[Only registered users see links. ]...

[Paragraph]

[Paragraph]


[Paragraph]

I will leave the final paragraph for someone else.


David A. Smith


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Old 03-27-2007, 12:54 PM
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Well. But can you also leave the mistakes here or to my email box?

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On Mon, 26 Mar 2007 06:18:21 -0700, "N:dlzc D:aol T:com \(dlzc\)"
<[Only registered users see links. ]> wrote:



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Old 03-27-2007, 01:06 PM
N:dlzc D:aol T:com \(dlzc\)
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Dear catinthosedays:

<catinthosedays@gmail.com> wrote in message
newsm4i03dv9q0o3kgl5e1nhdr0fkot9qv0pa@4ax.com...

Do not advertise your real email address on usenet, without
encoding it some way. There are software programs that harvest
this resource for email addresses to send spam to. Something
like:

.... with the disclaimer that there are no numbers, will convey
your email address and make it more difficult for spammers to
use.

No, I will not send you email.


It would be good to be sure you define what a "2f" system is, but
probably not in this introduction.

This is not a good venue for obtaining help with your reports /
papers.

David A. Smith


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Old 03-28-2007, 01:19 PM
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I think you've spent more time on teaching me common sense on email
safty.

Any way, thank u.

On Tue, 27 Mar 2007 06:06:24 -0700, "N:dlzc D:aol T:com \(dlzc\)"
<[Only registered users see links. ]> wrote:

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Old 03-28-2007, 04:57 PM
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Dear Bravo Chang:

On Mar 28, 6:19 am, Bravo Chang <[Only registered users see links. ]> wrote:

You "think" wrong.

I spent 30 minutes correcting your grammar, correcting the tense of
various sentences, and breaking your paragraphs into easier to read
sizes. I substituted words where they had a better "flavor" in a
technical paper ("framework" for "skeleton"). I spent about 30
seconds warning you about what you will now receive. I left enough
"gray area" that an editor can change a couple of things to adjust
"flavor" to his liking (according to Robert Heinlein's advice).


Don't worry, you will not get free work out of *me* again.

David A. Smith

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Old 03-29-2007, 05:03 AM
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Thank you:

I substituted "framework" for "skeleton", and defined "2f system" in
main body.

The pre-released version have already been online last year. That is
why I did not feel un-appropriate to ask help here.

I know the value for 30 minutes of hard work for correcting my grammar
by a respectable Editor Emeritus. But I'm a poor student and can't
afford your work. Since you've corrected the manuscript, I hope you
can give me the right version.



On 28 Mar 2007 09:57:09 -0700, "dlzc" <[Only registered users see links. ]> wrote:

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Old 03-29-2007, 01:04 PM
N:dlzc D:aol T:com \(dlzc\)
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Dear Bravo Chang:

"Bravo Chang" <[Only registered users see links. ]> wrote in message
news:[Only registered users see links. ]...

This is a newsgroup. Editing a manuscript is not news, even if
the topic is of interest to the physics community.


The first two posts I made to this thread have your content. I
did not remove the leading ">", which probably confused you. I
stopped putting "[" and "]" around my edits, because there were
too many.

The first post has only the modified text of your manuscript, and
a final sentence to indicate that I had not touched the final
paragraph.

The second post has the modified text of the last paragraph.

David A. Smith


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Old 03-29-2007, 01:42 PM
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I feel shame to understand now what a chinese proverb goes:entertain
an angel unawares!

Thank you.
It's my privilege.

On Thu, 29 Mar 2007 06:04:22 -0700, "N:dlzc D:aol T:com \(dlzc\)"
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Old 03-29-2007, 02:13 PM
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Dear Bravo Chang:

On Mar 29, 6:42 am, Bravo Chang <[Only registered users see links. ]> wrote:

Do not feel shame. Your editor has not accepted it yet!


Thank you for the apology.

David A. Smith

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